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Abstract painting 580

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I'm on the edge...
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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

This picture is slightly confusing. Let me start off with the blue ball at the top. Why is it a blue ball? If that ball represents you, does that mean you a big blue ball in real life? Are you nothing but a blue ball nobody will play with? Are you a talking and typing inanimate object? Strange how this world is.

What about that grayish green stuff down at bottom? Is that supposed to be water? If so, why tell people not to push you? It seems deep enough to soften your fall and you can float back up and you'll be fine.

What is the ball standing on? I know it's an edge, but what exactly is it standing on? The environment that is painted on here reminds me of the graphics on the Atari 2600. They were never really detailed and they're hard to recognize what they are. Your painting lacks detail and it's confusing. Maybe trying painting something that's closer to a human figure, and maybe if your trying to promote anti-bullying, maybe paint buildings instead of water. Maybe add a night sky with stars and make the building the figure is standing on in more detail.