literature

Guilt

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Brought on by your wrongful deeds,
That heavy feeling in you chest,
The burden of your sins,
Weighing you down.

All brought on
By the person
Who you wronged.
They push you down,
Putting stress on you.
They remind you of your sins,
Guilting you to no end.

The unbearable pain,
Of your misdeeds.
It sits on your back,
Weighing you down.
A never ending whisper in your ear,
Reminding you constantly.
The reminder of what you did
Sits in you chest like a lead weight.
ill add one later
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Do not fear the weight you carry is a resemblance
A remembrance of what you are going to have to balance

All isn't lost
look through the eyes so it doesn't turn into frost
Loneliness and guilt is something we all share
I know because I've been also there

It turns what brightens our days pitch black
Make sure you listen to your heart and forgive what you mask

I'm sure it'll be what we would want if it can bring our hopes back
I'll be waiting for you so we can bring words to this world,which it certainly a does a lack.