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Two weeks

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Wide awake in the night,
Can't sleep once again,
This time for another reason.

Tossing and turning,
Thoughts racing,
Missing that one special person.

Every night before,
Wide awake with that person,
Chatting and having a good time.

Every night missing sleep,
Just to talk to them,
Now they are gone.

Yet, I am still awake,
Just waiting long into the night,
Waiting for them to respond.

Yet, I know they won't,
Two weeks that person will be gone,
Having fun in the happiest place on earth.

Two weeks I am awake in the middle of the night,
Waiting so impatiently,
Crying myself to sleep because they are gone.

Two weeks more I am stuck in frozen hell,
Miserable without them,
The only person that truly brought me joy.

A person who's laugh,
A simple laugh,
Would break me free of my depression.

A person so beautiful
That the gods and goddesses
Are green with envy.

A person so shy,
That she doesn't even see
Her own beauty at all.

Two weeks that person is gone,
Two weeks in paradise,
Two weeks without me.

Two more weeks for me,
Stuck in this frozen hell
Without her.

Two weeks without a word from her,
Missing her night and day,
Thoughts consistently moving back to her.

So I lie here away,
Wondering what she is doing,
Hoping she is happy.

My thoughts are racing all the time,
And they are always about her,
I miss you so much.
Not one of my better poems, still okay. It's been a long time since I wrote this kind of poetry, trying to find the muse.

Two weeks she is going to be away, and this is only the third day, and yet it has felt like a year since we last spoke.
© 2014 - 2024 vansc14
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This poem is very wonderful.
I feel the sadness in this one though.
I love how you used the word like turning-racing, reason-person
they are matching when I read and I love that <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>
And the Two weeks part is the part that I like the most when I read.
It's contain a lot of feeling.
And the way you described her is really good as well.
Oh! I love the word frozen hell.
Also the night and day too.
It showed how much you miss her

Thanks for show me this poem <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>
Hope you are not that sad anymore <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>